Reflection 2.1

I felt this paper was a lot harder then the last one. I had a harder time finding my thesis and making intelligent arguments. I felt as though Chua was just so absurd that it was hard for me to refute her and come up with my own opinion on this issue. I don't think I was as organized so for my final draft I want to re-organize and make my paper more concise. I also had an issue with the grammar and run-on sentences. I realized that my sentences were very lengthy which can make my paper look sloppy and too wordy. Other then that I think I made some good points and I works hard to utilize my research.