Reflection 1.2

After meeting with my teacher I felt a lot more confident on what I needed to fix and how I could better improve my essay. I always try to write my essay as if it were the final draft, but I realize there always seems to be aspects I can fix. I always have a terrible time with grammar so I try my best to get it proofread by as many of my friends as possible. I think in my last revision I was able to hit all the point and writing techniques we'd worked on in class. I was also able to stick with my thesis and provide information on it which I was happy with. I think I could have done a better job at transitioning but nonetheless I think my final draft came out as well as I had intended.