Reflection 1.1

I think I composed a better first draft then I thought I would. I had a strong thesis and stuck to it the entire essay. Although I had minor issues with being a bit too repetitive and having to reorganize which paragraph should go where I think overall it was a decent paper. I do however need to start paying closer attention to my grammar. Even when i print out my paper, and read it out aloud, I always have an issue with grammatical errors and run-on sentences. I think next time I will have someone read my paper before handing it in.